These pics are awsome. You could definately make money doing this. The one with her standing by the metal pole in the yellow shirt I think is to bright but other than that they are great. So when you are here can you take some pics of me and make me look that good? Great job!!! Love ya. ~Tara P.S. I want to learn to take pics like that!
OK - here are a few thoughts. The first one looks a little "hunchy" - great focus and awesome composition, I'd just like to see her a little straighter, or maybe pull a little more hair over her right shoulder. The second one is great (I'm a little OCD so I might have photoshoped out the number), 3 is nice, 4 is blown out - you lose her to the structure behind her, 5 is nice, but I don't love the dead vine, I wish it were alive, 6 is a nice shot but a strange expression (I don't know what she's thinking) and 7 is great. In all - pretty great! But hey, you wanted suggestions so I came up with some :)
Thought of something else, I'd like to see #'s 2 and 4 in black and white (do some dodge and burn work in photoshop on 4 and you could probably stabilize the lighting a little).
I am amazed! You are loving that camera and lens are you not? Manual, right? Good girl! Tori, really, beautiful job! Dallas and Abby look awesome! I'm not big on the super tilted one of Abby at the end. I think a lot of girls tilt to much so watch it. Dead vine, agree. Overall, amazing!
My husband and I have been married for 5 years and we have a 1 1/2 year old son. We live in Lewisville, TX. I am a full time mom and work from home. My husband is a full time student in Chiropractic school. I enjoy doing photography. It started out as a hobby and has developed into a business. I do 2-3 photoshoots a week. I would love to help you capture moments that will last forever.
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These pics are awsome. You could definately make money doing this. The one with her standing by the metal pole in the yellow shirt I think is to bright but other than that they are great. So when you are here can you take some pics of me and make me look that good? Great job!!! Love ya. ~Tara
P.S. I want to learn to take pics like that!
OK - here are a few thoughts.
The first one looks a little "hunchy" - great focus and awesome composition, I'd just like to see her a little straighter, or maybe pull a little more hair over her right shoulder. The second one is great (I'm a little OCD so I might have photoshoped out the number), 3 is nice, 4 is blown out - you lose her to the structure behind her, 5 is nice, but I don't love the dead vine, I wish it were alive, 6 is a nice shot but a strange expression (I don't know what she's thinking) and 7 is great. In all - pretty great! But hey, you wanted suggestions so I came up with some :)
Thought of something else, I'd like to see #'s 2 and 4 in black and white (do some dodge and burn work in photoshop on 4 and you could probably stabilize the lighting a little).
Thanks Toni! Now that is what I am talking about. These are the kind of tips I need. Thanks :)
I am amazed! You are loving that camera and lens are you not? Manual, right? Good girl! Tori, really, beautiful job! Dallas and Abby look awesome! I'm not big on the super tilted one of Abby at the end. I think a lot of girls tilt to much so watch it. Dead vine, agree. Overall, amazing!
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